back to re-edit a scene from brown Bread to tidy up a plot line that a couple of people have said was a bit lacking in credibility. I was kind of in denial about this particular plot point as it meant going back and following the plot point all the way through the book to make sure it’s consistent. However, having done 80% of the work I’m glad I did. I think it adds to the story, and, given that I had misgivings myself, it’s better to have addressed it. At least I will feel I did my best whether the book succeeds or not.