going back over a key plot point in Brown Bread. a couple of people have pointed out a weakness and I have reluctantly gone back to it. Reluctantly because it means going through the whole book and tweaking all points at which this plot point intersect. However, there is no denying the book improves with this extensive re-editing. it’s a question of overcoming the initial inertia and getting down to it.

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